The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! But, if what this guy was saying is true, then the only reason the room would show up as vacant is if the family was checking out. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! lincoln. No Such Luck part 2. Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Lola: Me too! That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! I hate that you never listen to reason! Luna. No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." SEE YOU NEVER!" Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. I got to find somewhere to hide! And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. And can you please unlock my room for me? Learn more. (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! Whats next? I don't need anyone! (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). I was being selfish!. Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . Understood?!" It really doesn't. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! The Louds. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. Im sick of everything thats happened to me! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. They were my favourite! Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Lincoln: I said NO! (Lynn looks confused.) Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. ENOUGH!!! I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! My team needs that! IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." He just looks away as he enters the police car, and is driven away to jail. Bad. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Was the thought on her mind. You're all insane!!! Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). There's a massive storm heading your way." This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. It's too broken, even for me! ", (Lynn starts running towards him. Here's another Alternate Ending. Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. Tell the community what's on your mind. Luna: I dont know. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. NOTHING!! Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. "YOU HEARD HER!" I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . As much as she didn't want to, she knew that slamming the door in his face would make the situation even worse than it already was, so she opened the door enough for him to get in. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. Maybe I should just quit the team. Lucy: Lincoln's right! And I HATE LEECHES!" ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Trying explaining that!" ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. How can I help you?" A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? Luan: Maybe these silly superstitions werent such a good idea. But seriously, we made a mess of everything! They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! Not you or Lucy. Rita: Honey! Luan added. Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. And after that, the whole room was silent. You're scaring even me. She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. You all are really, really bad luck! "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. Keep on writing fics like this! During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. They are looking very heartbroken.). ", (the sisters cheers. Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Just tell us and well let you skip it. [The softball playoffs. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. See if I care! Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. Youve made your point! "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Rita pondered for a moment and then said, "Hey I know, why don't we make a quick stop to Aunt Ruth's and" Her idea was interrupted by Lori slamming on the brakes hard, jerking the van to stop. Any bad luck? That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? Lana said, glaring at her parents. Lincoln: Girls! Completed 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. We messed up too. But right now, ive had it! So expect a bill in the mail." ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? Now we've broken the shower." "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! Even you Lisa! QUIET! "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" Didn't you say you would never kick us out? I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". He managed to, but with a twist. Except for Lynn). ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. N Eddy's big picture show . Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" I'll never be able to play games the best way again! So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. The End. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! I HATE THIS!!! Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" I hate gator wrestling! it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Youre our brother! The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. No such luck alt ending5. They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. They were upset and disappointed, their kids promised them they wouldn't cause any problems but they did. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . House of Lies alt ending14. ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! What do you think, Pep? Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! I need a very big, long rest from them. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Sam: Luna, I got your letter. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. ", [Later, they arrive back in their house.]. Ruthless People extended ending13. (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. "Good riddance." He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). Anything bad happen then? But right now, no! I hate boring science lectures! Lincoln asked his parents. The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. Lori said. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! "What do you kids want?" The worst part is, they had no argument against this. We got your back. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" ", Lincoln: "Thanks. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. You love baseball. (cries). 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. ), Lincoln: But you know what!? (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). I will not be discarded and than used!! Why do these three buffoons have the room. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. Lola: How could he?! ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! We get it. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" It was against the law. "Listen to what?" ", Luna: "No, you were right. You overreact to everything! Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform.